题目

请高手帮帮我改改我英语作文里的错误
一
Today,I would rather I had a job.
If I had a job now,I would make much money.However,I am studying in the college.To be frank,I would rather I had a job.Because I think if were at work,I also can get much experience and knowledge.I think it will be make me more wonderful.To be the truth,I am very regret to study here.If I had not choose to study here,I think I would be happy now.In addition,If I were rich,I would buy a house for my parents.I want to live a life of ease and make people around me have a good life.In all,I will try my best exertions to study and I can find a good job.
二
I wish I were a boy!
I still remembered that when I was a child,my parents ofter said to me “How I wish you were a boy.” Because if I were a boy,my father would not have lost his job,my family would be a good family.
Were I a boy,I would try my best to learn knowledge as much as possible.Because in order to support the family,parents try their best to work ha

提问时间：2021-02-01

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Today, I would rather have a job. If I had a job now, I would make much money. However, I am still studying in the college. To be frank, I would rather have a job. (Because 一般不用在句首,此处不用亦可...