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一段英文自我介绍,不知道有没有错的地方求修改,考试急用,
Hello everyone.I comefrom jilin province.I was born in a scholarly family.I love reading booksinfluenced by my parents.Since childhood I take an interest in declaim.Lastyear,In May ,I won the first prize in the declaim contest in changchun.InNovember,I also won the first prize in the speech contest in changchun.Myfavorite hosting is Hongyun.When I first met “saying the Yangtze River” Ideeply remember her.The solid foundation and rich tone has been my puesuit ofthe goal.I believe through my attempt I will become a dedication andprofessional host like Hongyun.

提问时间：2021-01-28

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Hello everyone.I 介绍自己名字come from Jilin province. My name is XXX and from .
I was born in a scholarly family.
I love (like) reading books influenced by my parents. I like reading because of my parents' influence .
Since childhood I take an interest in declaim(朗诵可以是Speech , recitation等).
In May ,last year,I won the first prize in the Speech contest in Changchun.
Later the same year In November I also won the first prize in the speech contest in Changchun.
My favorite host is Hongyun. When I first met “saying the Yangtze River” which remind me of her performance. Those solid foundation and rich tone has been the pursuit of my goal.
I believe through my dedication and hard works , I will become a professional host like Hongyun.