题目

英语高手进,帮忙改下我的英文日志
以下是我的英文日志,语法不好,不知道有什么错误或者表达的不地道的地方,希望指出,就当做改错了,
The Sentiment of My Future
Sometimes,it feels as if things were pre-destined and pre-arranged by a higher power that we as a common person can't even have power to change for...
I've thought teacher is my destined profession,but it's difficult to be a teacher only with bachelor's degree.I've got to get master's degree or even doctor's degree..Oh ,my god,my fleeting youthful days.I can't stand my three years of wasted time!
I am always keeping everything to myself,sometimes,I need a person to give me some suggestions.What could I plan to do after I finish my study?I must be confused after several years.
If one has no life goal,he will idle away his lifetime.So,for now,I have no choice but to hunt for work,and work can help me feel that I am useful.
Life is full of twists and turns,and I feel obliged to face the music sooner or later.What all I could do is to pass TEM-8 and to improve oral english.I will never give up on my dreams...

提问时间：2021-01-18

答案

The Sentiment of My Future
Sometimes,it feels as if things were pre-destined and pre-arranged by an unknown power that we as ordinary people can't even have control over...
I once thought that to be a teacher is my destined profession,but it's difficult to be a teacher only with a bachelor's degree.I've got to get a master's degree or even a doctor's.Oh ,my god,my fleeting youth days.I can't stand my three years of wasting time!
I am always keeping everything to myself,sometimes,I need someone to give me some suggestions.What can I do after I finish my study?I must be confused after several years.
If one has no goal for life,he will idle away during his lifetime.So,for now,I have no choice but to hunt for a job,and work can help me feel that I am useful.
Life is full of twists and turns,and I feel obliged to face the music sooner or later.What all I could do is to pass TEM-8 and to improve oral english.I will never give up my dreams...
We are both English majoy.I hope that my suggestions can give you some help!