题目

这篇托福作文能得多少分?
题 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication,such as letters,email,or telephone calls.Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
正文
Different people chose different ways of communication.Some perfer to communicate by facing that person while others rather writing letters,emailing or calling that person.Even though both of them have their own advantages,we cannot say that face-to-face communication is better than other types.There are three reasons why face-to-face communication is not the best way to communiacte with others.
First of all,people are less likely to control their emotions well when they communicate with others face to face.When some people disguss issue by faceing others they tend to force each other to agree on their own opinions.And as a result,problems are solved slowly and relashionships are ruined sometimes.In contrast,communicate by writing or

提问时间：2021-01-11

答案

嗯,单看这篇文章,楼主大概能拿个22左右的分数吧总体结构是不错的,每个论点也比较清晰,这是优点.缺点主要是：1.拼写及用词.拼写错误和用词失误有点太多了,建议楼主不管打字多急时间多紧,最后还是要抽1分钟快速浏览一...