题目

我写了一段关于扇子的英文简介.
This is China's traditional culture——the fan.About thousands years ago,the ancient Chinese had invented the fan,people used it to escape the summer.because the fan is usually like a circle,so ,it's also represents the happiness and reunion.Today,I sent it to you ,also hope you and your family can be happiness.
我下个月要和荷兰的学生一起生活几天,见面要先互换礼物,
我就准备送扇子.
我写了一段英文介绍,等送的时候说,
英语好的帮我看看那里有语法不对的或者是用词太生硬的帮我提出来改正,
顺便有知道的可不可以告诉我荷兰人怎么样啊.怎么与他们相处啊.

提问时间：2021-01-09

答案

1.it's also represents错了,应该是it also respresents
2.最后一个happiness应该改为happy(如果我下面的最后一小句改得不好的话),
就挑了两个明显的地方,其他的小地方我也改了
This is China's traditional culture----giving gift to a friend.Several thousands years ago,the ancient Chinese invented the fan,people use it to bring cool wind in the summer.Moreover,because the fan also looks like a circle,so it also represents happiness and reunion,Now,I give it to you,hope it can bring happiness to you and your family.
最后一小句,我把hope you and your family can be happy改为it can bring happiness to you and your family,因为can be 好像说的人家本来不happy