题目

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when talked about the heated question whether living in a extended family is good or not,some people deem that it plays an indispesable role in reinforce family ties.some others,who objected to it, argue that it is not essention.i am inclined to the formor due to three reasons.

提问时间：2021-01-07

答案

修改的地方都用序号标出来了when talked(1) about the heated question whether living in a(2) extended family is good or not,some people deem that it plays an indispesable（4） role in reinforce（5） fami...