题目

With the development of society and the improvement of people′s living standard,education is of great significance to one′life.Due to their strong appetite for knowledge,a vast number of teenagers prefer to go abroad for further study.As far as I am concerned,overseas study is a desirable choice .The reasons are prevented below.
On the one hand,studying abroad is beneficial to improving all sorts of skills.
In such a foreign country,which could provide a wonderful language atmosphere,international students can attain a good command of the second language.
It′s also a effective way for one to cultivate independence,which is the fundamental capacity of one′s life.One has to learn how to take care of and protect oneself and how to get on well with people who have different cultural backgrounds.
On the other hand,students can learn advanced science and technology.They receive a different education .What′s more they have easy access to the first rate facilities and the lates

提问时间：2021-01-03

答案

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