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请英语高手们帮我点评一下我的这篇英语四级作文(语法、用词或者其他)万分感谢
1:一次性塑料袋曾被广泛使用
2:使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题
3:限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义
Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags
In the past years ,the disposable plastic bags was used to person extensively,especially people who buying in supermarket.There are many problems with disposable plastic bags was thrown away everywhere ,and it will cause the White Pollution .And secondly ,plastic bags are not easy to decompose ,so it will leave in our land a long time and pollute our groundwater.Lastly ,some people always choose to burn the disposable plastic bags when it is many .
As the plastic bags takes more and more problems,our government make a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags.For my part,I think the action can take many benefits to person .To begin with ,it will reduce the product of disposable plastic bags and as the price increased,people will control their desire of use it.In addition ,it can protect our environment better and ensure our healt
1:一次性塑料袋曾被广泛使用
2:使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题
3:限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义
Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags
In the past years ,the disposable plastic bags was used to person extensively,especially people who buying in supermarket.There are many problems with disposable plastic bags was thrown away everywhere ,and it will cause the White Pollution .And secondly ,plastic bags are not easy to decompose ,so it will leave in our land a long time and pollute our groundwater.Lastly ,some people always choose to burn the disposable plastic bags when it is many .
As the plastic bags takes more and more problems,our government make a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags.For my part,I think the action can take many benefits to person .To begin with ,it will reduce the product of disposable plastic bags and as the price increased,people will control their desire of use it.In addition ,it can protect our environment better and ensure our healt
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In the past years ,the disposable plastic bags were (was) used by people (to person) extensively,especially those (people) who buy(ing) things in
supermarket.There are many problems with disposable plastic bags being (was)
thrown away everywhere ,(and it will cause) thus causing the White Pollution
.And secondly ,plastic bags are not easy to decompose ,so they (it) will remain (leave) in our land a long time and pollute our groundwater.Lastly
,some people always choose to burn the disposable plastic bags when they have too (it is) many (1).
As the plastic bags created (takes) more and more problems,our government
made(make) a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags(2).As far as
I am concerned (For my part),I think the action can bring (take) many benefits
to people (person) .To begin with ,it will reduce the production (product)
of disposable plastic bags and as the price increases (increased),people
will control their desire of using them (use it).In addition ,it can protect
better both our environment (better) and (ensure) our health.In short (a word),it is a beneficial thing that it can make our life better.
(1)或when there are too many.
(2)时态不清楚,政府通过法例了吗?还是计划这样做?
如果还未能
As the plastic bags have created more and more problems,our government
will pass a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags.
取消括号内文字
In the past years ,the disposable plastic bags were (was) used by people (to person) extensively,especially those (people) who buy(ing) things in
supermarket.There are many problems with disposable plastic bags being (was)
thrown away everywhere ,(and it will cause) thus causing the White Pollution
.And secondly ,plastic bags are not easy to decompose ,so they (it) will remain (leave) in our land a long time and pollute our groundwater.Lastly
,some people always choose to burn the disposable plastic bags when they have too (it is) many (1).
As the plastic bags created (takes) more and more problems,our government
made(make) a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags(2).As far as
I am concerned (For my part),I think the action can bring (take) many benefits
to people (person) .To begin with ,it will reduce the production (product)
of disposable plastic bags and as the price increases (increased),people
will control their desire of using them (use it).In addition ,it can protect
better both our environment (better) and (ensure) our health.In short (a word),it is a beneficial thing that it can make our life better.
(1)或when there are too many.
(2)时态不清楚,政府通过法例了吗?还是计划这样做?
如果还未能
As the plastic bags have created more and more problems,our government
will pass a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags.
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