题目

.这篇英语作文对嘛?
Welcome to my hometown!Hunan is my hometown.It is a clean and busy town.It has a long history.There are many big supermarkets,beautiful gardens and good park here.It is very easy to go shopping.You can see big trees and nice flowers.There are many restaurants in Hunan .Many visitors come here to enjoy it.
I love my hometown.How about you?

提问时间：2021-01-02

答案

Hunan 是个省,不是镇 town是镇,建议把湖南改成具体的市或者县名.
good park有问题,应该是wonderful parks,后面的here必须去掉.
本文就这些有语法问题,其他,内容不是很紧密,有点混乱,可能是你的英语水平还有待提高.