题目

1.自我介绍(self-introduce)
Good morning.I am glad to be here for this interview.First let me introduce myself.
My name is fanxiao,I am 23 years old,born in hebei province ,I will graduat from Beijing Institute of Machinery Industry in June ,2008.my major is Vehicle engineering .I think it has a great relationship with communication and transportation engineering.Their relationship can be shown with an example:Just like a river,communication and transportation engineering,which often finds new discoveries and theories,is at the head of the river.And my major,which lays more stress on practical use,seems to be at the end of it.When both of them interact well enough,the discovries and theories in communication and transportation engineering can be soon turned into products in all of the modern industry.In the past years I have been prepareing for the postgraduate examination while I studied in School.and .Now all my hard work has got a good result since I have a chance to be intervie

提问时间：2021-01-02

答案

"i will graduate..."中文化,一般也用be graduated,
"i think it has..."改is 较好,“which often finds..."
being found 更合理,思路还可以,祝你成功.
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