题目

求高手看看这段文字有没有错误
Hello,everybody.I begin my speech now.Now let’s get to the point.This speech is about “Love and the world”.I always dreamed when I was so young.The world in my dream is like this.There were flowers and grass every where.The sky is blue and the air is very fresh.But it is only a dream.Everybody here knows the truth.You know the ozone hole at the top of the South Pole.We can’t do anything without it.And you know the temperature of the earth is rising.Can’t we do anything?No,we can.We can start to protect environment.If every student who is driven to school can take bus or ride bicycle to school once a week,we can make the earth healthier.My dream will come true.The world is beautiful; the world is full of love.That’s all my speech thank you!
Hello,everybody.I begin my speech now.Now let’s get to the point.My speech is about “Love and the world”.I always dreamed when I was so young.The world in my dream was like this.There were flowers and grass every where.The sky

提问时间：2020-12-31

答案

我勒个去槽点满满啊要一个个完善么?那样基本就要重写了好麻烦... 我太无聊了来帮你改.无视我吧= =Hello, everybody. Today I would like to talk about “Love and the world”. I always dreamed when I was a litt...