题目

后天考试了·今天检查作文发现有一小段好像写的有问题~有没有高手帮我改改··我总觉得语法有很大错!麻烦
The present signal is unmistakable:our teachers and parents are obsessed with an idea of making their children working hard and ignore to communicate with them,while they often can not express themselves clearly.What is worse,the bias and suspicion between the parents and children become a serious social issue.Youths,who all like to use the networking language,have a speedy expansion of its number .

提问时间：2020-12-16

答案

大作拜读,文理通顺,略有瑕疵,大写改过,仅供参考：
The present signal is unmistakable: our teachers and parents are obsessed with an idea of making their children WORK hard and ignore THE COMMUNICATION with them,while they often CANNOT express themselves clearly.What is worse,the bias and suspicion between the parents and children become a serious social issue. Youths,who all like to use the networking language,HAS a speedy expansion of its number .