题目

找一篇英文文章中的语法知识和错误
Hello,I read your letter to me,you said your son is very rebellious and bad,often give you trouble,so you want to formulate rules,and let him keep.but you don't know how to set the rules,so I'll give you some advice.
First of all,your letter said that your son's room is very messy,often want you to clean up,then you should let him weekly cleaning his room at least once; secondly,you said he was not interested in studying,but often can not finish the homework,then I think you should talk to him and let him finish homework on time,; finally,you said that he often give you trouble,so I think you should let him deal with his own trouble yourself.
Thank you for your letter and your trust,the above is my suggestion,also wish your son to live with you.
这篇文章有什么语法错误和语法知识请帮我总结一下,

提问时间：2020-12-11

答案

请楼主不要怪本人直言,这篇文章水平很低,句子重复又重复,而且文法上也有很多错,但我尽量保留原文替你更正一下:(Hello只是在口语上使用,书信上是没有人用的,可以去掉),(I read your letter to me 应重写为:Thank you ...