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英语改错题,Dear sir or madam,...
英语改错题,Dear sir or madam,I have learned from an advertisement what your company is in need for a secretary.I'd like you consider me for the position.My name is li min.I am twenty three years old.I'm studied business management in Xiamen University.I graduate this summer.I am familiar to computer operation and office software,which can help me do the office work very well.But I learned English for ten years.In the past two years,I have been an editor for English Paper of my department.My grades are out top in my department.What's the more,I like office work very much and I too think that I can be competent for the job I could have the opportunity to get the job I will be quite appreciative.0 Thank you for your consideration.I look forward to hear from you.

提问时间：2020-11-26

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1 what your company what 改成 that
2 My name is li min 名字要大写 LiMin
3 I'm studied business studied改成studying
4 I graduate this summer 加个will, I will graduate this summer
5 I am familiar to to改成with
6 But I learned English for ten years ,but改成And
7 been an editor for English Paper of ,an改成the
8 What's the more,却掉the
9 I too think that 却掉too
10 I could have the opportunity,前加个if ,if I could have the opportunity