题目

英语翻译
阅读电子书籍渐渐成为年轻人的新时尚.(trend)
Reading electronic books is gradually becoming the new trend of the young.
沪杭高铁使旅途事件缩短到一个小时.（cut）
The Hu-hang high-speed railway line cut the journey time to 1 hour.
经过一个月的重新装饰,中国馆再次向公众开放.（reopen）
After a month's redecoration,Chinese Pavilion reopened to the public.
令同学们高兴的是他们在假期中也能使用学校图书馆.(access n.)
What delights the classmates is that they can get access to the school library during the holiday.
网络在我们日常生活中起了举足轻重的作用,以至于当不能上网时人们感到无所适从.（loss）
The Internet plays such a vital role in our daily life that people will feel at a loss if they can't get access to the Internet.
因为是考试,所以请检查有无语法、词汇错误,会提高悬赏的

提问时间：2020-11-26

答案

怎么说呢,我认为要是单纯按语法来讲没有大错,但是要从语言习惯上来说,你的翻译有些问题.
我拿第一句来说：
阅读电子书籍渐渐成为年轻人的新时尚.(trend)
你的句子：Reading electronic books is gradually becoming the new trend of the young.
比较符合欧洲（英国）语言习惯的：It's gradually becoming a new trend of the young who often reading electronic books.
符合美国英语习惯的：
——————我决定还是都给你改改吧.所以耐心等候.————————