题目

是浙江人教版的，假如我来到了远古时代（或未来时代）。

提问时间：2020-11-23

答案

大家都看过《武林外传》吧,有一集讲的是一位先生坐着时空大巴来到了同福客栈.今天我也体验了一回,不过我去的不是同福客栈,而是远古时代.
“七十七号旅游团团员注意了,本车已到达远古时代,请下车.”下了时空大巴,导游对我们说：“你们在这可以停留一天,明天的这个时候,时空大巴会准时来接你们.好了,行动吧!”我们和一群原始人类同住,他们说的话等于“噪音”,我们这些来自二十一世纪的新新人类可听不明白,还好导游带来了双向语言翻译器,语言障碍就不存在了.“我们一起吃饭吧!”野人首领说.这时他们拿上来了一只血淋淋的生鹿.对啊,在这没有火的时代只能吃生肉啊!这可怎能让我们的“只认熟不认生”的胃买账呀!还好,还好,我找来了一些木头,拿出早已准备好的打火机.哈哈,点着了!我们吃了一顿香喷喷的烤全鹿,不由得犯了食困.野人朋友们主动帮我们看火种,还可以用来帮我们驱赶野兽.第二天,时空大巴准时来接我们了.我们恋恋不舍地离开了远古时代.
回到了家,我打开了电视机.一条新闻惊暴而出,那就是“远古时代惊现打火器!谁会想到那是我的打火机之壮举啊!
指导教师：海鲲
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Everybody read the TKS ",so the episode is a gentleman sitting space-time bus came with blessing inn.Today I also experience once,but I go not the same blessing inn,but ancient times.
"Seventy-seven member,tour,take this vehicle has arrived in ancient times,please get off the bus." Under the space-time bus,tour guide says to us,"you can stay in this day,this time tomorrow,space shuttle bus will come on time receive you.Well,so go!" We and a group of primitive people dwell,they said equals "noise",we these from the 21st century new new mankind can't understand,but also good Courier brought FanYiQi both languages,the language barrier would not exist."We have dinner together!" Savage chief said.Then they took up a bloody born deer.Yeah,in this era of no fire only eat raw meat!This can be the "how can we only know ripe not RenSheng" stomach buy!Okay,okay,I found some wood,take out already prepared lighter.Haha,point!We ate a delicious roast whole deer,I made food trapped.Savage friends volunteered to help us see fire,can also be used to help us driven wild animals.The next day,the time and space shuttle on time to meet us.We be reluctant to leave the ancient times.
Back home,I turn on a television.A news frightened suddenly and violently and go out,that is "ancient times appeared dozen firearms!" Ha ha,who would have thought that is my lighter the feat!
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