题目

帮我看看这段英文有没有错
It tells the story of Alice who was 20 years old.One day she went to a party with her mother.But she found that she was proposed in front of many people who were arrogant suitors.Suddenly a white rabbit came into her view ,she followed it to a cave then fell into fairyland.13 years ago,Alice had been to this place ,but she didn’t remember it .Here ,Alice and those lovely old friends meet again:the White Queen and two brothers ,caterpillars and so on.The wonderful adventures in Wonderland help Alice to learn a sense of great important mission that is to lead the inhabitants to end the Queen’s evil control of the world and make the paradise become peaceful.x0b
有语法错误的指出并改正,

提问时间：2020-11-22

答案

第二行found herself infront of 就够了 而且正确用法是be proposed to do第三行she followed的这句话前面要接连词and 因为两句话之间没连词是不可以并列的第五行 the White Queen,the two brothers,caterpillars et...