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My funny days as a Weiboer
When this word first came out,I didn’t spare an eye.Many friends were honest weiboer while I can’t understand what fun it could bring me by sitting by the computer.
Then there’s a night when I got nothing to do.I came across the website ‘sina Weibo’ and sign up for one.With the help of a friend,soon,I was introduced to a big group of classmates and friends.They were thrilled to see me.My being a new born in this special world,they sent necessary and helpful tips to me so that I could be familiar with it in a short time.They were like the elder and I’m the younger.The moment,a sense of happiness hit me as it shows that more than 30guys that were interested at me.
I watch what my friends are doing,what they would like to share,and how they feel as if they were sitting besides me,smiling,shouting,crying,confusing.It is this new technology that makes if possible for us to join hands with whomever we want and every time we feel like.
Once a morning,I was about to go to the bus stop when a stranger stopped me.He asked,’Could you tell me how to get to the Quechao Café?’ Quickly,I pointed the opposite side,but then I burst out laughing,’I’d like to cook one for you!’ Finally,he realized what was wrong and said,’Sorry!I mean,… ,Shangdao Café.’ I picked up my hand phone in no time to record it as a Weibo.It’s great fun to find something amazing and share it.During my trip on the bus,pictures of my friends’ watching my Weibo laughing were flashing in my mind.The sense of humor and happiness was copied 30 to everyone through Weibo.
It is a big scene,where I stand in the centre with all my friends and classmates surrounding me.They are warmth when I was anxious,they are non-tired journalist when I get bored,they are honest audience when I have something to spare,and they are always there on the big scene,Weibo!
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提问时间：2020-11-19

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My funny days as a WeiboerWhen this word first came out,I didn’t spare an eye.Many friends were honest micro-bloggers while I couldn't understand what fun it could bring to me by sitting by the compu...