题目

One person is still a person .but two people are a team.A
team can do everything that seems impossible .To succeed in life .We must iearn the spirit of cooperation .
First of all .We can catch happiness,relatians and friendship if we pull together .Cooperation makes people set aside their differences and work together .Second .as the famous proverb goes ,“Many hands make light work”.The power of only one person is very small ,but the power of lots people is strong enough to overcome any difficutly .Thild.It is easier to be suceessful.Good cooperation can make us work faster and better.
As we can see the the above,how necessery to be cooperation!As a saying goes ,One tree can not make a forest ,one flower can not make a spring But the most important means showing love for others It is love that turns the earth
这篇文章有没有语法错误,请帮改之

提问时间：2020-11-14

答案

第一句我觉得最好改为：One person is only an individual,but two make a team.
First of all 这句：relatians应为relations.同时我觉得catch改为get或obtain之类好些.
the power of lots people应改为：the power of lots of people,如觉得拗口可改为the power of many people
Thild打错了应为Third.
As we can see the the above改为：As we can see from above.
how necessery to be cooperation!改为：How necessary it is to cooperate (或to be cooperative)!
最后的两句断句没断好.But前面有个句号.for the others后面应该有个句号或逗号.
写得不错啊