题目

我的英语自我介绍 帮我看看是否有什么语法错误
Good morning teachers
i am very glad to be here for your interview .And i hope i can make a good performance today
my name is xxx i am 17 years old .i was a charater ,cheeful girl .And i like smile
in my spare time i like to read novels,i often buy some books and magzines to read .i enjoy the reading time .and i think reading could enlarge my knowdge
i am fond of music my favorite band is sodagreen ,their music feel so cosy and i like english ,too .i think language is very interesting and useful .Although my english is not good enough but i will study hard.i will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.
then ,i will talk about my family .There are 3 people in my family .my mother my father and i .My family is pretty good.I love my sweet warm home.
that 's all thanks
告诉我如何具体修改

提问时间：2020-11-07

答案

1.建议：It is really my honor to have this opportunity for this interview.2.错误：“.And ”---去掉and,另起一句或接前句.3.I am a happy girl and a girl of character.I smile a lot / I smile to everyone I...