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求帮忙改第一次写的托福作文.
it more important to understanding ideas and concepts than learning affect?内容如下：
Students always feel conflict on the fundamental issue such as whether to stress more importance on ideas or concepts understanding or facts learning in their daily study life.However,it is obvious that we should take the balance between the two basic parts,for ideas and concepts work together with facts to promote each other,making the process of learning more efficient.
Firstly,understanding of ideas and concepts make facts you take for granted learning more comprehensive.Something may get clear in students’ mind suddenly after they have learned a key concept or idea.For instance,when I was on kindergarten,I knew that climate across our motherland are quite different from region to region,but it is just a common sense because I had visited to mountains and rivers all over China with my parents and the fluctuation of climate was just what I experienced myself.However,as I grow u

提问时间：2020-11-06

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