题目

英语菜鸟作文一篇,帮我改改
2004年江苏卷
假如你是李晓华,住在江城.你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市,并希望了解你家乡江城的情况.请你用英语写一封回信.回信须包括下表中的内容.
自然情况
①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住
成就
②经济发展迅速
③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等.
④水、空气污染
⑤交通拥挤
对江城发展的看法
⑥（内容由考生自己拟定）
注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名.
2．词数100左右.信的开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入词数.
参考词汇：经济economy n
It gives me pleasure to receive your kind letter.I have honor to tell you about my hometown.here is something about it.
jiangcheng is a famous city in china.in this city you can find the changjiang rever besides,and the view is beauty.most importantly,it is very convenient to live.
in the past year ,it builds a lot of favtory,and other big bulidings.it made economy develops quickly,it also made the water and gas pullution.
there is nothing disadvantages but the traffic jam ,i think.it's a wonderful city,i always look forward to see the new change of the city.
we look forward to you reply at you earliest convenience.

提问时间：2020-11-05

答案

长江用yangtse river 比较好.beauty改成beautiful,用形容词.to live改成to live in.it builts...develop quickly 改成there have been built lots of factories and high buildings that make the economy develop q...