题目

英语语法问题改错
However,
the girls are unlikely to give up the privilege of having a holiday.
It
popped into my mind suddenly that the day before yesterday when my monitor had
each girl written a dream down.
All
the trees were charismatically dressed,which was made of a quite plenty of
elegant greeting cards,with all the cards said:may all girls become more
beautiful and vigorous,happy Girls'Day!
It
will play all styles of music,which represents the best wishes that boys for
girls.

提问时间：2020-11-02

答案

However, the girls are unlikely to give up the privilege of having a holiday.
It popped into my mind suddenly 【去掉that】 the day before yesterday when my monitor had each girl 【written-write】 a dream down.
All the trees were charismatically dressed, which 【was-were】 made of a quite plenty of elegant greeting cards, with all the cards 【said-saying】: may all girls become more beautiful and vigorous, happy Girls'Day!
It will play all styles of music, which represents the best wishes that boys 【make】for girls.