题目

My room is a cozy room.There is a big wood bed in my room.There is a bedside cupboard next to the bed.There is a clock and several photos on the bedside cupboard.There is a pop singer poster above the bedside cupboard and a wardrobe beside it.In my room,here is a pink rug on the floor.Opposite the bed,there is a little green bookcase.A lot of funny story books in the bookcase.There is a bright lamp on front of the bookcase.There is a wood dressing table.There is a painting of flowers above the dressing table.There is a desk between the bookcase and the dressing table.There is a computer and some cote books on the desk and a wastebasket under the desk.Beside the bookcase,there is an old little cabinet next to the bookcase.There is a blue case on the cabinet and cone yellow flowers in the case.There is shelf above the cabinet.There is a radio on the shelf.I love my cozy room.请帮我看看我的文法对不对!
如果我的文法有错,请帮我更改!
我想问有没其他的词可代替”there is”
因为我也觉得文章不停的话”there is”
还有最后一句” I love my cozy

提问时间：2020-10-31

答案

不仅仅是文法不对,标点符号也不对,全是There is, 是在造句,不是写作文,全无文法.只能从写了.
cozy是舒适的意思,可以用其他几个舒适相同的单词!There is也是如此,有些句子可以用which、that is来链接上下文.
beside还有很多其他的意思, 这里最好不要用!真的要说旁边的话就用aside吧.
There is a blue case on the cabinet and cone yellow flowers in the case.a blue case是什么啊?黄色球形的花在一个case里?