题目

帮我看看这段话有没有病句 英语的
Jim is my good friend.He is the same as me!We both like sports and we are both outgoing.But now he is weak.Because he is stressed out for study.He is stressed out when the test come.I want to help him.I am talking with him when he is stressed out.And I want to listen to music with him.Although I will help him to study better!I think he can get a good grade and never stressed out.
请问总体有没有语病？我的初中考试作文

提问时间：2020-10-30

答案

He is the same as me应该改成we have a lot in common.
不要but.Now he is weak,because he is stressed out for studying since the test is coming soon.
I talk to him when he is stressed out and I want to listen to music with him.
I think he can get a good grade without getting stressed out.