题目

能帮我看看这篇英语作文有哪些错吗
My name is Lihua,who was born in GuangZhou on February 1988.I have been schooling at Guang Ming Primary School during 1955-2001 and enter in The Sixth Middle school since 2001.My major subject is Chinese,Math,English,Physic,Chemistry and Computer.I have a talent for English and computer and I won the first place in my school 's computer competion.In addition I like collecting stamp ,swimming,pop muscic and skating.

提问时间：2020-10-16

答案

My name is Lihua.I was born in GuangZhou in February 1988.（月份之前介词用in,日期之前介词用on）I studied at Guang Ming Primary School during 1955-2001（ORZ这个年份是不是1995……） and entered The Sixth Middle School in 2001.（since要用完成时,也可以and have been studying in The Sixth Middle School since 2001）My major subjects .（好多个学科,所以用复数）are Chinese,Maths,English,Physic,Chemistry and Computer.I have a talent in English and computer and I won the first prize in my school 's computer competion.In addition,I like collecting stamps ,swimming,pop muscic and skating.