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下面是我的作文,希望大家有什么想法或者建议能提出来,
My New Year Plan
This year is really special for me.I come to new school,living alone and studying with people I don't know.In other words,it is a new start for me.I think the most important thing in here should be study really hard.Maybe it would be sounded ridiculous but it is true for a person like me who failed in high school comparing to those people I’m studying with.Now I got my destination and I should to find my own way to achieve it.
First of all,I will finish everything that teacher asked.Secondly,I’m planning to read some books that are helpful to my life.Last,I think basically sports are needed,so I would continue playing tennis in my spare time.These three aims seems easy but it can be very difficult when I trying to achieve them all.It needs perseverance which is missing from myself.
Just as churchill said,“never give in,never never never.”

提问时间：2020-10-14

答案

thing in here should be study really hard--------in,study incorrectly used
would be sounded ridiculous ----- would sound ridiculous
got my destination ---unclear
should to find ----no to
finish everything that teacher asked-------improper collocation
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