题目

My favorite sport star
My favorite sport star is a professional tennis player and a Russian young woman.She is pretty with beautiful smile and big,brown eyes.She is very tall and thin.She is perfect in many ways.Many people called her “Renaissance Woman”.Now,can you guess who is she?Yes,she is Maria • Sharapova.Today,I will introduce something with her.
Her childhood
Maria Sharapova was born on 19 April 1987 in a small Black Searsport town of Sochi.When she was 4 years old,she met with a very famous tennis coach,Form that moment,Maria started hitting tennis balls.Two years later,a tennis champion saw the Sharapova.She takes sharapova to the world—famous tennis academy in Florida,America.her tennis career is so successfully
Her accomplishment
In 2004,Sharapova stunned Wimbledon audiences when she beat champion player Serena Williams.She beamed the first Russian to win a Wimbledon women’s single title.And in 2005,she is World No.1.At the end of 2006,she was the world's highest-paid female athlete.But in 2007,she was puzzled by illness,is very terrible to her.However,she never discourages ,she always be by virtue of their strong will and optimistic attitude ,her charming smile always on her face.In 2008,she won Australian Open.Sharapova has won three Grand Slam singles titles and 21 WTA singles title .
After work
After work,Sharapova has many interests.Example:reading,visiting museums,painting,and learning new languages.Sharapova is a fashion woman.She joins lots of fashion show.She is also a good model.Many activities has not disturbed her own job,because tennis is her favorite job,the World No.1 is important to her.
This is Maria • Sharapova.Despite many difficulties.But she is always positive and optimistic.In any case,she always smiles to other people.
请版我看看这篇文章有什么语法错误!

提问时间：2020-10-12

答案

第一行的第二个"a"去掉,表一身兼二职的第二个不用冠词.
第二行"ways"改成"fields"表示领域.
第三行"called"改成"call"表示一般情况,不用过去时.
第三行"who is she"改成"who she is"
第四行"with"改成"about"
第七行"Form"改成"From"
第八行"hitting"改成"playing" "takes"-----"took"
下一行"her"---"Her" 下一行"successfully"---"successful"
下3行"+the world no.1"
下一行"puzzled by"---"diagonse with" "to"---"for"
下2行"+the austrialian open"
下一行"singles"---"single" 下一行"title"---"titles"
下3行"show"---"shows"
下2行"to"---"for"
简单改了一下,仅供参考,加油~