题目

英语翻译
I never know what I can say
just know I fall in love with you
what I mean is I want to escape
but you are so shine like a diamond
and I am a material girl just like I always know
my heart strongly wants you
come on baby come on baby
just want you to be with me
count the star and stare at the sky
I enjoy doing anything with you
I know I'm not beautiful and smart
there are so many girls like you
I'm so weak and afarid
baby,my heart beats so quickly when we meet
If you also feel like that
tell me and let me know
I will be more brave to tell you
that I like you
本人英语较搓,希望哪个英文高手看看我写的有没有错误~然后帮我修改一下 3Q!

提问时间：2020-10-08

答案

I am a material girl ,应该是you are 吧.整首小诗看完了,首先是基本没有错误,但是感觉啰嗦,不像是抒情诗,而且意思表达很混乱,需要修改