题目

帮忙看看我的英文翻译得对不对,急、急~~
摘要
企业信用管理是现代企业管理的核心内容之一,是企业在市场经济环境下得以生存与发展的必备条件之一.同时企业信用管理水平的提高又会极大地促进在全社会建立一个良好的信用环境.我国企业应该重视企业信用管理,采取措施建立完善的信用管理体系,以增强企业竞争力.本文从我国的实际出发,通过剖析企业信用风险产生的原因,然后提出：一方面政府要建立健全信用管理相关的法律和制度,加强管理和执法力度,通过国家宏观制度的完善为企业信用管理创造良好的环境.在此基础上,另一方面对企业实施全面系统的信用管理,提出企业信用管理体系的建立要将企业信用文化建设,企业信用组织机构建设和企业信用风险的控制三大建设紧密结合起来.
关键词：社会信用体系 ； 企业信用管理 ; 企业信用管理体系
Abstract
Corporate credit management is one of the core contents of modern management and the basic factor of the existence and development of all enterprises in the market economy. Meanwhile, the improvement of corporate credit management will contribute to the establishment of a good credit environment in China. Enterprises should pay more attention to credit management and Establish right credit management system in order to enhance competency. Starting from China’s realities, by analyzing the causes of enterprise credit risk, this article points out : on the one hand, the government should enact and perfect the laws an

提问时间：2020-10-08

答案

With regards to China’s realities,by analyzing the causes of enterprise credit risk,this article points out :on the one hand,the government should enact and perfect the laws and rules relevant to credit management,strengthen the management and execution,and provide good ENVIRONMENT for the enterprise credit management through perfecting the macro-control system.
enterprise credit management 可以写成
enterprise credit management (ECM)写了一次后,以后都写ECM,看的人比较舒服.
大陆中文的写法都是这样,翻译成一点别扭都没有的英语确实很难.