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we oftensee some people breaking rules of etiquette on the bus.what suggestions we can give them some?
sometimes,the persons on the bus drop litter around.when it happens,we should say,'WOULD YOU MIND NOT DOING THAT?"AND WHILE AOMEONE is smoking on the bus,we say,"sorry,could you please put out your cigarette?" c spitting is such a impolite behavior.and we should say to the person,"please don't do that!"of course,some people like talking or laughing loudiy with their friends on the bus.if that happens ,we could say,"could you please keep quiet?"
keeping the rules of etiquette is important for us to do.and we should also let others understand it!

提问时间：2020-10-05

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We often see some people breaking rules of etiquette on the bus.What suggestions we can give them?
Sometimes,the people on the bus drop litter around.When it happens,we should say,'WOULD YOU MIND NOT DOING THAT?" And while someone is smoking on the bus,we say,"sorry,could you please put out your cigarette?" Spitting is such an impolite behavior and we should say to the person,"please don't do that!"of course,some people like talking or laughing loudly with their friends on the bus.If that happens,we could say,"could you please keep quiet?"
Keeping the rules of etiquette is important for us to do,and we should also let others understand it!
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