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What are your thoughts on the idea that failure is necessary for education to take place?
Why we should receive education?Because we should gain knowledge,learn to be a better person and lead a better life afterwards.It may probably be the general recognition to the question; however,not so many people realize why we should learn.The novelist John Hersey wrote,“Learning starts with failure; the first failure is the beginning of education.” I also agree with his point of view.I think failure is an indispensable part of education.
Failure is why we start to learn and failure is everywhere while we are learning.When we were young,we often see other people ride bicycles so lightheartedly and that is where we have the idea to get on bicycles and emulate other’s movement.However,few people know how to ride bicycle at the first time see it,so the first time we have such a possibility to fell down from the bicycles and that is where we have to learn.During the learning proc

提问时间：2020-10-03

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楼主：其实你这篇文章得12分是没问题的,开头有名人的Quote,中间2个详细的例子,最后一个有寓意的结尾.我唯一的几个建议是：Thesis最好再详细点.你的Thesis看得出是第一段最后一句：I think failure is an indispensab...