题目

求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q
Dear sir,
I’m a student at Ningbo University .On summer vacation ,I have a lots of time to do something what I like to do.
I think I should have a part-time job during the coming summer vacation.
In free time ,I like to do something about computer .So I think I will do well if I get the job .
I hope you will give me a chance to do it .If you think it will be ok ,please call 631059.
Thank you for reading this letter .I’m looking forward to your reply.
Your’s
Huang

提问时间：2020-08-10

答案

Dear sir,
I’m a student in Ningbo University .On summer vacation ,I have a lot of time to do whatever I like to do.
I think I should have a part-time job during the coming summer vacation.
In my free time ,I'd like to do something about computer .So I think I will do it well when I get the job .
I hope you will give me a chance to do it . If it is ok ,please call 631059.
Thank you for reading this letter .I’m looking forward to your reply.
Your’s
Huang