题目

我写了一篇英语作文,
Water
Water is important to us.We can't live without water.But in our Earth,there are one-fourth water is fresh water.Therefore,we must save water.We can do in our daily lives.Don't take a bath,you can take a shower intead of it.If you find a dropping tap,you must fix it in time.Remember that water is necessary for us.You mustn't waste water.So let's try our best to make our Earth more and more beautiful.

提问时间：2020-08-08

答案

there are one-fourth water is fresh water.中,表达四分之一,用 a quater就可以了.
We can do in our daily lives.do后的宾语呢?加个it 如何?
If you find a dropping tap,you must fix it in time.用on time.表示按时.
结尾的try one’s best to do sth.用得不错!