题目

谁能帮我看看这句话到底有没有问题?
It is a kind of ending which you may find unexpected for the first time you read it,but after deeply thinking,you have to admit that it is real and reasonable.
这句话有没有语法问题啊?为什么我提交作文时总是说这句话语法不规范?若有,应该怎么修改?

提问时间：2020-07-27

答案

for the first time you have read it.
整个句子可以改成：Though it's a kind of ending which you may find unexpected when the first you have read it,you have to admit that is real and reasonable after deeply thinking.