题目

我的这篇英语短文有错误吗?
One day,Tim and Ben are going to shopping in the supermarket.They are looking at a man in the supermarket.Tim asks,"What is he taking?" "He is taking a bottle of juice."Ben says.Then,the man is waiting for a bus on the road.He is reading a newspaper.Tim and Ben are talking to a policewoman."That man is a theif!" "Really?" The policewoman is taking the man,they are going to the police station.Tim and Ben are very happy.
希望能为我指出错误并修改,

提问时间：2020-07-26

答案

正在进行时用的太多了.如果是讲故事的话,用过去式比较好.现在时的话One day,Tim and Ben are shoping in the supermarket.They see a man in the supermarket.Tim ask:" What is he taking?" "He is taking a bottle...