题目

一道英语改错题谢谢
短文改错
Dear Ms Smiths,
I appreciate your help very well.On the first day of 63____camp,you can came up to myself while I was sitting alone.After 64____that ,you always gave me specially attention and inspired 65____to me to join in activies.As a result,I gradually got to know66____ the other campers.Because yhe help you gave me that summer,67____my life changed.I gained so much confidence I go back 68____to school as new person.My grades improved .I became 69____very active but made new friends.Today,I got a letter that 70____ said I had been admitting to a college.I am proud of it.I just 71____want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.72____
Yours,
Bob

提问时间：2020-07-18

答案

63.well--much (非常感谢very much)
64.myself--me (帮助某人came to help sb.不必用反身代词)
65.special (形容词做定语修饰attention)
66.去掉inspired后面的to (inspired sb.)
67.because后面加of (because是连词,一般引导状语从句.because of+名词)
68.正确(这句话可能是漏打单词上去了,前后不连贯)
69.as后加a (a new person 单数)
70.but--and (并列成分,并没有转折的意思)
71.admitting--admitted (被动I had been admitting to a college.被允许进入大学,即被录取的意思)
72.become