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在 2010年春晚上，刘谦的魔术--手穿玻璃取硬币，又一次震撼了电视观众，使他再次成为中国内地最热的魔术师。请你根据下表提示，用英语对刘谦做一简单介绍，写一篇120-150词的英语作文。

简介	著名魔术师，1976年出生于台湾。7岁时开始对魔术感兴趣，12岁荣获“全台湾儿童魔术大赛冠军”。2010年春晚表演使他成为中国内地最热魔术师
成就	表演深受世人欢迎，曾到美国、日本、韩国、英国等演出。
爱好	他善于和观众互动、创造性地进行思考；认为使魔术成功的原因是思想而非操作能力。

答案

Born in 1976 in Taiwan,  Liu Qian is one of the greatest young magicians in the world. He became interested in magic when he was seven years old. At the age of 12, he won Taiwan"s Children Magic Contest.
As a youn g magician from Taiwan, he  is popular wide for his magic shows. Countries he has performed in include the  United States, Japan, South Korea, the UK and so on. He is known
for his interaction with his audiences. He thinks it is actually thinking rather than one"s controlling skills that makes magical shows successful. What"s more, he suggests the magician think carefully about how to design the shows creatively to make them appear more interesting.
At the 2010 CCTV"s  Spring Festivals Gala, Liu Qia n performed an amazing magic trick, Liu Qia n performed an amazing magic trick, which makes him the hottest mag ician in the mainland.

解析

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