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常言道: “一个成功孩子的背后是一个伟大的母亲” (Behind each successful child is a great mother)。请结合自身经历, 简述你母亲在生活和学习上对你的关爱与帮助, 并谈谈你对母爱的感受。
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As the saying goes, behind each successful child is a great mother. Nobody can achieve success without parental love and Mother’s devotion plays an especially critical role in our life. Mothers dedicate almost everything we need, which is a necessary part on our road to great achievements.
My mother always gives me a helping hand in both my studies and my life. Since she is a math teacher, whenever I meet with any difficulty in the subject, she is always patient to give me guidance. On the other hand, she takes care of me in my life like other devoted mothers. Whenever I fall ill she spares no efforts to help me recover from the illnesses. It’s impossible for me to grow up and achieve success in my life without my mother.
In fact, no matter whether you are successful or not, mothers always stand behind you and back you up. Everyone knows that mother’s love is just like a flowing river, and it keeps running forever, pushing and carrying you forward to your destination of life and work. And what we can do is never to stop halfway. Only in this way can we treasure and repay the sacrifice and devotion of our mothers.
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试题分析:这是一篇开放性作文,给出了一个话题,“一个成功孩子的背后是一个伟大的母亲”,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】As the saying goes, behind each successful child is a great mother. 这句话是非限制性定语从句, Mothers dedicate almost everything we need, which is a necessary part on our road to great achievements.这句话用了定语从句, Since she is a math teacher, whenever I meet with any difficulty in the subject, she is always patient to give me guidance. 这句话用了让步状语从句和原因状语从句, Whenever I fall ill she spares no efforts to help me recover from the illnesses. 这句话也是让步状语从句和词组:spares no efforts to do,It’s impossible for me to grow up and achieve success in my life without my mother.这句话用了it做形式主语,.And what we can do is never to stop halfway. 这句话里面有主语从句,Only in this way can we treasure and repay the sacrifice and devotion of our mothers.这句话用了倒装句,还有文章用了 On the other hand,这样的词使文章更加连贯。
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举一反三
请结合材料,按要求用英文写作。
No pains, no gains. With every effort made, a person always harvests what he has planted.
要求:
(1)就此材料发表你的感想;
(2)应紧扣材料,结合实际,有明确的观点;
(3)词数不少于60。
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一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍中国“春节”及这个节日的主要活动。
写作要点:
它是中国的传统节日之一,是家人团聚的时候;
各家走亲访友,一起吃年夜饭;
大人给小孩压岁钱,燃放烟花爆竹。
注意:1、词数不少于80;
2、适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、不必按照中文提示顺序来写,避免逐字翻译;
4、文章开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
The Chinese Spring Festival
The Chinese Spring Festival falls on the 1st day of the first month of the Chinese lunar calendar. ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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书法展示:请用手写印刷体抄写下面短文
Recently, recycling textbooks has been put into practice in some provinces. As far as I am concerned, it is a good way which will benefit both society and us students.
For one thing, it is good news to students from poor families who can’t afford textbooks. For another, recycling textbooks can save natural resources. We are cutting down too many trees every day. In the long run, it helps to develop the students’ environmental awareness. What’s more, students may learn to share and work with others through recycling textbooks.
To sum up, I consider recycling textbooks useful and helpful.
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请根据提示以”My English Teacher”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
包括:某老师是一位年轻教师,她/他教英语,教学态度认真,对工作和学生要求很严格,耐心帮助班里的学生。她/他帮助你提高了英语成绩。
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最近,你班就“学校是否应该对老师进行民主测评”召开了一次主题班会。讨论情
况如下:
赞成:65%
反对:35%
可以促使老师更加了解自己的优劣势,更友善地对待学生,提高教学效率。
学生评价不客观,严格的老师常会得低分,老师知道后,情绪会受到影响,从而纵容学生,不利于学生的成长。
你的观点……
要求:根据表中内容,写一篇120词左右的英语短文。
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