题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
1.同学们谈到中国梦纷纷表示大受鼓舞;
2.你谈到了自己的梦想;
3.如何实现自己的梦想。
要求:(1)词数100字左右;
(2)在答题卡上作答。
April 8 Monday Fine
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge .To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.
答案
One possible version:
April 8 Monday Fine
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge .To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.
解析
试题分析:本篇书面表达是一篇日记。在写作时要注意使用第一人称。日记是记叙已经发生过的事情,要用一般过去时,此篇文章内容是畅谈梦想,所以也会使用一般现在时或一般将来时来表述现在的感受或者未来的行动。此外,分析要点可知文章内容要涉及三个方面,即同学们的感受、自己的梦想和自己的打算,在写作时要恰当使用连接词把这三个方面有机联系起来。而且写作时还应注意细节上的补充以丰富文章内容,使行文连贯顺畅。
【亮点说明】文章符合日记文体的要求,而且要点全面,结构紧凑。文中使用了多种表达方式,如非谓语短语Inspired by President Xi’s Chinese Dream,不定式短语To realize my dream,状语从句so that I can get into a good medical college和定语从句where I can prepare myself adequately for the job of a doctor.等,使文章句式丰富,亮点纷呈。两个倒装句Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a respectable job.和Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.的使用不但丰富了句式,同时也使文章上下衔接更为紧凑。此外,高级词汇enthusiastically、 accomplish、 adequately等的出现也提高了作文的档次。
核心考点
试题【最近,你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动,每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解。请写一篇日记,记述班会情况及自己的感受。内容要点如下:1.同学们谈到中国】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
【写作内容】
1. 出生日期:1991年12月1日;
2. 出生地点:杭州;
3. 个人情况:中国泳坛明星,中国人的骄傲;
4. 毕业学校:浙江大学;
5. 专长:大学毕业后专攻长距离自由泳*;
6. 成绩:伦敦奥运会获两块金牌;2013年巴塞罗那**“世界锦标赛”***男子400米、800米、1500米自由泳冠军,4 x 200米自由泳接力季军,
7. 并被评为本届世锦赛最佳男运动员,成为历史上首次获得这一奖项的亚洲游泳选手。
参考词汇:自由泳* freestyle swimming 巴塞罗那** Barcelona 世界锦标赛***championships
【写作要求】
1. 只能使用五个句子表达全部内容;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
Every morning, on his way to work, Mike passed an old man who was always at the same place with a cup in his hand hoping to get a bit of change from those who passed by. For most people, this person was someone to be ignored as if he didn’t exist, someone who they didn’t want to be bothered with. However, Mike would always say good morning to him and wish him a nice day and sometimes would drop a dollar or two in his cup. This behavior went on for several years until one day before retirement.
He told the man that he would no longer pass by because it was his last day on the job. The man took his hand and shook it warmly saying that he had always looked forward to seeing Mike not because he dropped a few dollars in his cup. He said he would miss him because he was one of the few people who said hello and bid him good day. The man also said that his warm words always brightened his day and helped him to continue.
We all have the power of words and we often do not recognize that some can be devastating(毁灭性的) while some can be encouraging.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容;
2. 然后以约120个词就言语的力量的话题发表你的看法,并包括以下要点:
(1)你对上文中Mike的做法持什么看法;
(2)谈谈日常生活中言语的力量;
(3)以你或他人的经历举例论证言语的力量。
【写作要求】
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
提示:
1.对英语李老师教学的评价。
2.回顾在校时你的心情。
3.对老师的理解和祝愿。
信的开头、结尾已经写好,但不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Li.
I"m very excited to write to…_______________________________________________
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Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 随着医学的发展,人类的平均寿命将会达到120岁。
2. 由于新能源的出现,污染问题将得到控制。
3. 人们的日常生活也将有很大的变化。 如机器人可以为你做家务;椅子的颜色能够随着你所穿的衣服而改变;手机可以带在手腕上, 通话时可以看到对方;可以乘坐新型的电梯进入太空度假。(手腕 wrist 电梯 elevator)
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建议他回国;
你的理由是:⑴ 学有所用,就业容易;
⑵ 照顾父母。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.行文应连贯,内容应完整;
3. 开头语与结尾已为你写好,不计入词数。
June 8th
Dear Jianhua,
I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
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Best wishes,
Yours,
Minghua
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