题目
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As a person in modern society,you should never forget that everyone needs encouragement. And everybody who receives it is changed by it. It was novelist Mark Twain who said :“One compliment can keep me going for a whole month.”
The impact that encouragement makes on people can be deep and significant. A word of encouragement from a teacher to a child can change a life. A word of encouragement from a spouse
can save a marriage. A word of encouragement from a leader can inspire a person to reach his potential. Like Zig Ziglar says,” You never know when a few sincere words can have an impact on a life.”
I’ve read that the 19th century writer Walt Whitman struggled for years to get anyone interested in his poetry. In the midst of his discouragement,Whitman received a life-changing letter from an admirer of his work. The note read:“ Dear sir, I am not blind to the worth of the wonderful gift of Leaves of Grass. I find it the most extraordinary piece of wit and wisdom that America has yet contributed. I greet you at the beginning of a great career.” It was signed by Ralph Waldo Emerson.
Whitman enjoyed a long career and is now considered one of the giants of" American literature. But when times were tough,he needed encouragement to keep him going.
This season is the perfect time to give a gift everybody wants—and everyone needs.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容;
2.然后以约120个词就¨鼓励对人生的影响”进行议论,内容包括:
(1) 以事例说明鼓励对人的影响;
(2) 谈谈你的认识或感想。
【写作要求】
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
答案
One possible version:
The writer tells us Whitman’s great success thanks to the timely encouragement from Ralph Waldo Emerson. He emphasized the importance of a word of encouragement that makes a life-changing impact on a person’s life.
It’s true that all people need encouragement from others, including our parents, teachers and friends. As a student, I have received encouragement from my teachers, classmates and parents many times. I remember once I was much discouraged and even ready to give up my maths study in Senior One. It was my teacher Miss Lin who helped me as much as she could. Now maths is one of my favorite subjects among all the subjects and I feel more confident in learning other related subjects.
No act is too small and no positive word too uninspired. Only when we get encouragement from others can we continue our career smoothly. Do give others encouragement whenever it is needed.
解析
试题分析:本文是篇材料作文,内容要求学生先概括所给材料的中心意思,然后以事例说明鼓励对人的影响,谈谈个人的感想和认识。注意增加细节,使衔接合理,还要尽量用高中阶段学习词汇和句型。注意长短搭配。
【亮点说明】本文结构明确,思路清晰。第一段用34个词概括了所读文章的主要内容。接下来通过自己的亲身经历说明鼓励对人的影响。最后一段写明自己的认识和感想。在文章中,有thanks to、make a life-changing impact on等短语的应用,也有It’s true that主语从句和倒装句等较复杂句子的巧妙运用。
核心考点
试题【阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。As a person in modern society,you should never forge】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
1. 开始学习高中英语时,觉得英语比初中英语难很多,几乎丧失信心。
2. 后来认识到英语的重要性,每天努力学习英语,向老师和同学请教更好的英语学习方法。
3. 现在英语取得了很大进步,对英语越来越感兴趣。
要求:字数100左右。
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内容要点如下:
● 确定学习目标
● 改进学习方法
● 学会独立生活
● 参加课外活动
● 处理好同学关系
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 可适当增加细节。
Dear Zhang Ming,
I’m sorry to hear that
Yours,
Li Hua
你到达橘园的方式,时间,及当时的天气状况;
你在橘子采摘节的所见所闻。
注意:日记格式已给出;词数120左右;可适当增加细节以使行文连贯
Saturday, Nov.15 Sunny
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注意:1. 词数:100-120词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:东北虎Siberian tiger
Dear Editor,
I’ve just learnt the news online about _________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1. 表达关心和问候;
2. 提出建议:
1)早睡早起,养成规律的生活习惯;
2) 健康饮食,多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果;
3) 加强锻炼,多参加户外活动。
注意:1. 词数:100词左右,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I am sorry to know that you’ve got flu.__________________________________________
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I hope you will be back with us soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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