题目
题型:不详难度:来源:
1.青少年中存在的恶习以及它们的危害。(恶习和危害各至少2点)
2.好习惯的重要性和必要性。(至少2点)
3. 呼吁你校学生养成好习惯,过健康生活。
注意:
1. 词数120左右,开头语已为你写好, 其词数不计入总数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
答案
Dear students,
In the present world, we teenagers are living under great stress. As a result, in order to relieve the stress, some of us have developed bad habits, such as smoking and drinking, which are not only bad for our health but also can do harm to our society. Besides, some students prefer junk food, causing weight problem(obesity). What’s worse, some are even addicted to the net at the cost of their studies and future.
Facing such serious situations, we’ll have to get rid of band habits and form good ones, which is necessary and urgent. As we know, doing sports, reading , living positively are all good habits and only by forming good habits can we be happy and make achievements. It is well-known that it is good habits that lead many people to succeed.
Dear follow students, let’s take action right now and keep physically and mentally healthy and form good habits . I believe they will benefit us all our lives!
That’s all . Thank you !
解析
试题分析:本次写作任务是就“养成好习惯,过健康生活”这个话题写一封倡议书,属于议论文写作。考生要先审清题目要求,确定好作文人称、时态、写作要点、段落等基本内容。本文是应用文中常见的倡议书。话题是呼吁中学生要“养成好习惯,健康过生活”。有很强的可写性,文章的要点也基本上都给出来了,但只是一个提纲,内容有:1. 青少年中存在的恶习以及它们的危害。2. 好习惯的重要性和必要性。3. 呼吁你校学生养成好习惯,过健康生活。除了基本的要点,考生还需要做适当的发挥。明确作文的基本内容后,就是选用准确的词汇和恰当的句子来表达。在写作的过程中,要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,让文章更有文采。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如: Besides, What’s more等,让文章看起来很有条理,也很流畅。
【亮点说明】范文观点明确,有理有据,不乏好的短语和句子:be addicted to 对…上瘾,at the cost of以…为代价,take action采取行动。As a result, in order to relieve the stress, some of us have developed bad habits, such as smoking and drinking, which are not only bad for our health but also can do harm to our society. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句,some students prefer junk food, causing weight problem(obesity). 这句话用了现在分词做状语, Facing such serious situations, we’ll have to get rid of band habits and form good ones, which is necessary and urgent. 这句话用了过去分词做状语和非限制性定语从句,As we know, doing sports, reading , living positively are all good hanbits and only by forming good habits can we be happy and make achievements.这句话用了非限制性定语从句和倒装句, It is well-known that it is good habits that lead many people to succeed.这句话用了it做形式主语。还有范文还使用了:Besides, What’s worse,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。
核心考点
试题【目前青少年压力过大,为排解压力一些青少年染上了一些恶习,如吸烟,饮酒、吃垃圾食品、上网成瘾等,请你以学生会的名义参照以下提示用英语写一封倡议书,呼吁中学生要“养】;主要考察你对写作等知识点的理解。[详细]
举一反三
【写作内容】
目前,越来越多的青少年参加各类电视节目的才艺表演(talent shows)。对此,中学生的看法各有不同。
赞同 | 不赞同 |
展示才艺,增加社会经验; 增强自信; 有利于学生全面(overall adj.)发展。 | 模仿多,没有自己的风格; 沉迷于“明星梦”,无心学习; 有上当受骗的危险。 |
必须用5个句子表达全部的内容;
将5个句子组成连贯的短文。
【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
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Once upon a time in a land far away, there was a wonderful old man who loved everything:animals, spiders, insects...
One day while walking through the woods the nice old man found a cocoon(茧)of a butterfly. He took it home. A few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it could go no farther.
Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon.
The butterfly then came out with ease.
But it had a swollen body and small, shriveled(萎缩的)wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly.
What the kind-hearted man did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were Nature"s way of forcing fluid(液体)from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.
Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life. If we were allowed to go through our life without any hardships, it would fail us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. And we could never fly.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词就“个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺”的主题发表看法,至少包含以下内容要点:
(1)你读了这个故事的感受;
(2)叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果;
(3)假如你是父母的一方,你会如何磨砺自己的孩子?
【写作要求】
1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
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1. 考试失利的好处(两点);
2. 考试失利的弊端(两点);
3. 你应对考试失利的做法。
注意:
1. 短文必须包括所列内容;
2. 词数120左右;
3. 文章标题和开头已给出。
Failure in exams
As we all know, Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to avoid failures sometimes, which greatly upset them.
Recently, ____________________________________________
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内容包括:
1.比赛开始时间:周日上午9点;
2.询问Peter是否感兴趣:
3.如果Peter答应看球赛,你将提前购票,并在体育馆入口处等他。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:韩国Korea 体育馆stadium
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
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I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
提示:1.人人都想保持健康
2. 饮食要健康:多吃水果,蔬菜们因为它们富含纤维素和维生素;少吃黄油,奶酪、咖啡和巧克力,因为它们含糖和脂肪太多,糖和脂肪会让你迅速变胖。
有良好的生活习惯:定期锻炼,充足的睡眠,不要过度劳累,不抽烟等。
要求:1. 短文须包括上述所有要点,科适当增加细节,以使短文连贯。
2. 词数120 左右。
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