题目
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答案
Many students fail to perform well in an exam not because they lack ability, but because of the pressure from many aspects. In my opinion, pressure is part of life. It’s quite natural for us to feel stressed occasionally, at an exam, or when speaking to a stranger. So it’s of great importance to have a right attitude towards pressure. What we need to do is to relax ourselves and face the challenge positively and initiatively.
As Senior 3 students, we have to deal with some grown-up problems and make decisions by ourselves. Family can be one of the biggest causes of stress, such as problems with arguing with parents or brothers or sisters. We also have lots of stress from school, either from our classmates or teachers. However, the greatest pressure comes from study, which worries most of us as the National College Examination is approaching. We also feel stressed about choosing our education after high school or not affording to go to university.
In order to reduce pressure, first, a balanced diet and enough sleep are necessary; secondly, I would schedule my study properly so that I can have time to do sports or listen to music; also, friendship, support from my parents and encouragement from my teachers can help me a lot. I would try every means to relax myself and work with high efficiency to achieve my goal.
解析
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子:In my opinion在我看来, of great importance to 对…很重要,either …… or……要么…要么…, try every means to Many students fail to perform well in an exam not because they lack ability, but because of the pressure from many aspects. 这句话使用了not…but…结构, It’s quite natural for us to feel stressed occasionally, at an exam, or when speaking to a stranger.这句话使用省略句和it做形式主语, What we need to do is to relax ourselves and face the challenge positively and initiatively.这句话使用了主语从句, However, the greatest pressure comes from study, which worries most of us as the National College Examination is approaching. 这句话使用了非限制性定语从句, In order to reduce pressure, a balanced diet and enough sleep are necessary; 这句话使用了不定式做目的状语,I would schedule my study properly so that I can have time to do sports or listen to music;这句话使用目的状语从句 ,还有范文使用了first, secondly, also这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。总之,范文使用大量高中教材中出现的高级短语和句型,考生应该能做到学以致用。
核心考点
举一反三
内容要点如下:
◇ 简介自己,特别是打球的水平(如球龄、成绩等);
◇对球友的要求(与自己水平相当;周末有空闲等);
◇给出联系方式(电话56221342;邮箱:luckylilei@hotmail.com)。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 标题已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节以使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:羽毛球 badminton
A Badminton Partner Wanted
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1. 为什么要写这封英语信。
2. 你们学校门口及附近交通拥挤的原因。
3. 提出二至三条建议。
注意:词数120左右。开头部分已给,不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
I’m Zhang Xiaoming, a student from Grade 3. I am writing to discuss …
1.感谢家人,朋友和老师。特别举例感谢某个老师(不用真名,一律使用Mr. Wang, 并写出原因。
2.回顾高中三年的生活。列举出你印象深刻的活动。3. 展望未来。
注意:开头与结尾已经给出,所写部分120字左右。
Dear teachers, families and graduates, welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Guangming High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2014!
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学习方法 | 学习效果 |
背诵范文 | 运用英语思维,进行模仿性写作 |
多阅读英文文章 | 吸取语言材料 |
多听英文广播 | 提高听力水平 |
学习语法 | 正确表达 |
多写日记 | 在做中学 |
多练习口语 | 提高口头技能 |
参考他人的习作 | 取长补短 |
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 开头与结尾已经给出。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing.
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That’s all. Thank you.
1. 上中文课,跟老师和同学学习;
2. 多开口说,多与人交流;
3. 看中文电视,阅读中文书籍和报纸。
注意:1. 词数不少于50。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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