题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

第Ⅱ卷（共40分）
第三部分：写作
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was 5, my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved. Every day I
practiced playing it though my father demanded. But before long, I transferred my interest in the
piano to some other thing so began to avoid practice it. When my after realized this, he encouraged
me, but was strict whit me than before. With her help, I went the hardest time and made great
progress. Here I sincere express my gratitude to my father. On the journey of life, our parents have
lit the light of hope for us. What they have done broaden our horizon. No one deserves bigger
thanks to our parents.

答案

When I was 5, my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved. Every day I
a
practiced playing it though my father demanded. But before long, I transferred my interest in the
as
piano to some other thing so began to avoid practice it. When my after realized this, he encouraged
things              practising
me, but was ∧strict whit me than before. With her help, I went∧ the hardest time and made great
more或stricter    his        underwent experienced或through
progress. Here I sincere express my gratitude to my father. On the journey of life, our parents have
sincerely
lit the light of hope for us. What they have done broaden our horizon. No one deserves bigger
broadens
thanks to our parents.

解析

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