题目

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（满分15分）
随着社会的发展，网上购物成为一种新型的购物方式。请根据下表提示，谈谈网上购物的利与弊。
要求：1.语句流畅，书写规范。2.包含提示内容，并可适当发挥。3.词数80左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。4.文中不能出现人名、地名等真实信息。

Advantages	Disadvantages
方便（convenient）；24小时营业； 不用排队	看不见物品；容易受到欺骗（be cheated）； 不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣

Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now.___________
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答案

Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything as you like. You don’t have to queue with other shoppers.
Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day. However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.
In conclusion, we should make proper use of the internet shopping.

解析

这是一篇给材料作文，要点已经通过一个表格形式给出。动笔之前要认真阅读材料，不能遗漏要点。给出的材料较为简略，可以适当发挥。可以适当使用两介词使语意通顺，句子连贯，短文最后可以发表一点钟自己的看法。这是一篇说明性的文章，写作时态主要就是一般现在时态，注意人称和数的常见问题，写好后多读几遍适当修改。