题目

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书面表达（15分）
光华中学准备采取一些措施减轻学生的负担，于是向学生广泛征集意见。假如你是李华，请根据下面要求向学校提交一份减负的建议。
要求：1.所提措施有理有据，能确实起到减轻学生负担的作用；
2.能适当地、正确地运用一般将来时和形容词的比较等级；
3.80个单词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Headmaster,
I am glad to hear that you will lighten(减轻) the burden(负担) of us students. ______________________________
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Yours 
Li Hua

答案

Dear headmaster,
I am glad to hear that you will lighten the burden of us students. It’s true that we have too heavy a burden of study every day. It makes us feel stressed out. I hope you will let the teachers give us less homework every day, so we will have more time to relax ourselves. Can we have fewer Chinese, English and math classes a day? Can we have more music, art and PE classes a week? Can we have more time to enjoy our hobbies? I think if we are asked to spend les time on study, we will pay more attention to it. That’s my advice. I hope they can come true.
Yours, 
Li Hua

解析

本题是写一篇给定要求的建议书，写作的话题为向学校建议有关减负的事，具体内容包括学生负担过重，应该减少学生的作业，每天上更少的语数外，可以上更多的音乐，，美术和体育，让学生们有更多的时间来享受他们的爱好，在写作时应注意符合题意和不同时态的使用，同时应注意语言的准确性和连贯性。