题目

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话题作文：“最美女教师”张丽莉的事迹感动着我们，同时激励着我们以她为榜样，从身边小事做起，争做一名合格的中学生。请以此为话题，参考以下提示写一篇短文。
提示：爱护自己，养成良好的习惯；关心他人（父母、同学、老人、儿童及无家可归的人），与人和睦相处；参加社会活动，争做一名志愿者等等。

答案

Mrs. Zhang’s story moved us. We must learn from her. We should try to be a good student. First we should learn to take good care of ourselves, and start good habits of life and study. Second we should be glad to help others. We are supposed to do what we can to help our parents and classmates with housework and schoolwork. Third we should take an active part in social activities. For example, we can clean up the city parks, pick up rubbish, go to the hospital to help the sick and cheer them up, raise money for charity and so on.
In a word, we should try our best to help the people in need, and make us more perfect and get more pleasure from it.

解析

这是一篇给材料作文，本文只给出了写作的要点。动笔前我们首先要围绕这些要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，特别要注意不能遗漏提示中的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是单数第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。