题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

******说：“实现中华民族伟大复兴，就是中华民族近代以来最伟大的梦想。”作为中学生，我们也应该有自己的梦想。请说说你的梦想以及你将怎样实现你的梦想。
要求：1.题目自拟；
2.语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校；
4. 80词左右。
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              

答案

My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

解析

试题分析：这是一篇激发学生们谈自己梦想的一篇作文，由******的话导入话题，让学生有梦想并付诸行动去实现梦想，因为谈自己的梦想，所以应该用第一人称写，不仅叙述自己的梦想还得写出如何实现梦想。
【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式，为文章增色不少，如：The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.等，本文涉及到一般过去时、一般现在时及一般将来时等，语句连贯，梦想贯穿整篇文章。